Saturday, March 29, 2014
Blog Response to “A Worn Path” by Eudora Welty
I read this story several years ago in an English class and
admired it then. However, reading it again has greatly expanded my appreciation
of Welty’s writing. Though much of the
story affected me as I was reading it, creating a tension of whether or Phoenix
would make it to her destination, of the strange contrast of help and danger
the hunter seemed to represent, it was the end that created the deepest
response in me. As I’m sure Welty intended, the moment we find out Phoenix’s
motivation for walking to town, her drive to get the medicine for her grandson,
the story is altered. Welty instilled deep feelings of helplessness,
determination, and fear in me by combining three fairly subtle revelations at
the end. The first being that when Phoenix reaches the doctor’s office, having
worked so hard to overcome the difficulty of the trip, she has a moment of
memory loss, of dementia, an instant that more than all her physical trials, illustrates
the vulnerability of her age and position. “My grandson,” Phoenix finally says
after several moments of unresponsiveness, “It was my memory had left me. Then
I sat and forgot why I made my long trip” (Welty 1549). Even the love for her
grandson, that has driven her so far, is something that Phoenix can lose and
forget. Secondly, Welty has Phoenix describe the degree of severity of her
grandson’s illness saying that at times he’s “not able to swallow. He not get
his breath. He not able to help himself” (1549). This illustrates the reason
for Phoenix’s determination, and makes you feel the gravity of the situation,
how desperate both she and her grandson are for her to succeed in making her
journey there and back. Lastly, to complete the emotion that this scene
creates, Welty has the nurse states that “The doctor said as long as you came
to get it, you could have it” (1549). In this moment we realize that there is
no other option. Not only do we now see how damaging the grandson’s illness can
be, but we see that there is no other way for him to acquire the medicine he
needs. Everything depends on his grandmother being able to make the trip.
Everything depends upon a woman who is aging, who has moments that she cannot
remember her own life. It is so powerful a combination of clues. Reading it, I
felt the sense of the inevitable that hangs over both their futures, that at a
certain moment Phoenix will no longer be able to achieve this feat, and when
that moment comes the worst may happen for them both.
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